My literature review reads like a list of summaries
Reorganise your review around ideas and debates, so sources speak to each other and your own argument comes through.
In short
Start here, today. Take one section of your draft. Next to each paragraph, write in one sentence the claim it makes about the field. Wherever you can only write “summarises Smith”, you've found a paragraph to rework. This takes about 30 minutes.
After that, work through these steps. Choose one to jump to it.
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Tick each step as you finish it. Open a step for the how.
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Find the themes and debates
List the questions your sources are trying to answer, the points where they disagree and the methods they rely on. These become your headings and paragraphs. If the same author now appears under several themes, that's a good sign.
Build a synthesis matrix
Make a table with sources as rows and themes as columns. In each cell, note in a few words what that source says about that theme, or leave it blank. Reading down a column shows you the state of a debate, and the blank cells often point towards your gap.
Lead with claims, not authors
Open each paragraph with a topic sentence that says something about the field, such as “Studies of X largely agree on Y, but they explain it in two competing ways.” Then bring in the sources as evidence. Move author names into the middle of sentences or into parentheses.
Put sources in conversation
Use verbs that show relationships: extends, challenges, complicates, confirms, overlooks. Say how one source responds to another, even when the authors never cite each other. This is where synthesis actually happens, and where a reader starts to hear you.
Say what the body of work shows
Close each section with a few sentences of your own on what this work establishes, what it leaves open and why that matters for your question. You aren't claiming the last word. You're showing that you've weighed the evidence and drawn a conclusion from it.
Ask for feedback on the structure first
Before polishing, send your supervisor the topic sentences on their own as an outline and ask whether the argument holds. It's quicker for them to read than a full draft, and it gets you feedback on what matters most at this stage. Record their comments in the Feedback Tracker.
Words you can use
Is this you? Signs to look for
- Most paragraphs open with an author's name, as in “Smith (2019) found that”.
- Your supervisor has written “too descriptive” or “so what?” in the margins.
- You could shuffle the paragraphs and nothing would change.
- You know what each paper says, but you're not sure what you think.
Why this happens
Summary is the natural first stage. You have to understand each source before you can put sources together. The trouble comes when the draft stops there, because the reader is left to do the synthesis themselves, and most won't.
A synthesis is organised by ideas rather than by authors. Each paragraph makes a claim about the field, such as where researchers agree, where they split, what they assume, or what nobody has tested, and then uses several sources as evidence. Your voice lives in those claims.
Many students hold back because they feel too junior to judge published work. But the review isn't asking you to rule on who is right. It's asking you to show how the conversation is structured and where your study enters it.
Worth a look (5)
- They Say / I Say, by Gerald Graff and Cathy BirkensteinA short, practical book on joining an academic conversation, with templates for responding to other writers.
- Manchester Academic PhrasebankPhrases for referring to sources and comparing what they say.
- Google ScholarA free search engine for scholarly articles, theses, books and court opinions in every field. Set up alerts so new papers on your topic come to you.
- Semantic ScholarA free search engine for research papers from a nonprofit AI institute. One-line summaries and citation links help you see how a topic fits together.
- OpenAlexA free, open index of hundreds of millions of scholarly works, authors and institutions. You can search it directly or use its data for bibliometric research.
More on finding and reading research in the resource library
When to bring someone in
Your university's writing centre can work through one section with you and show you where summary could become argument. If your supervisor keeps writing “too descriptive” without saying more, ask them to mark one paragraph that works and one that doesn't. Comparing the two is often clearer than any general advice.
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